Week 6A

This is my final rotoscoping project for National Love Your Pet Day, on February 22nd.

Critique:

Questions:

- Is there a narrative?
- Do they use rule of 3 well?
- Is boiling consistent with style?
- How does timing work?
- How is overall visual form & composition?
- How can they improve the visual form & composition?

1. Sophia
- Lines are smooth, which made the final execution turn out very well.

2. Ben P.
-  Like how he took initiative and made the clouds slightly move, it sets the scene.

3. Bailey
- Good details, the facial expression is visible even thought it's small.

4. Bryce
- If you fill in the jelly beans it might make Happy Easter easier to read.

5. Summer
- Make the person bolder if you don't want to add color to them, just so the important parts of the video stand out.

My Critique:

• like how the view is expanded to the proper size.
• Have the fish make it's way out from behind the castle faster.
• Use a hand-writing font instead of strong sans serif font
• Add more detail (like to the fur)
• Like how the camera is moving a little bit, makes it dynamic
• Color schemes are nice
• Have the words appear at the end, or appear throughout each scene.
• Like how the words appear, kind of makes it like it's a gif.