Today in class, we went around the room and critiqued everyone's first scenes for their rotoscoping project. Here is some of the feedback I received:
- The dog goes pretty good, you've even got the motion of the wagging tail just right
- fluid movement, I imagine muted colors with maybe some bright accents
- the hand is a little cut off which makes it tough to see the petting movement
- Interesting first few seconds...excited to see more
- good depth & realism
- not 100% sure about holiday yet, however you only have a few seconds done
- why portrait?
- eyes could look more "finished"
- I like the squiggly eyes
- can't tell what line on floor is
- Fill in the dog's eyes with some color
- The form is there and there are not many shaky lines
- full of life; make the style a confident, consistent choice. I like the loose scribbly eyes - go with that
- The style choice to make it look like it was filmed on a phone was a cool choice; Perhaps play around with that concept.
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